(Holiday season is back, and I'm coming out with another ambitious story series that will hopefully run throughout this month and the next, culminating before my third semester of college kicks off.
I will not reveal anything about this story and let you all figure out how it'll pan out in the subsequent chapters. I want to gauge the level of anticipation and interest I can create in a story without letting the reader know the plot outline in advance.
Since I am bad at nomenclature, I am leaving this story untitled as of now. If and when an apt title comes to me, I shall update this post for all to see.
Needless to say, any comments/suggestions/criticisms are welcome here as well as on my FB page. Read on...)
Chapter 1: Invitation to a Party
“We will be eagerly expecting your graceful presence, Ms.
Parmar” the elegantly worded invitation concluded. The initials were not
printed or separately inserted, at least to the naked eye, which struck her as
odd for a moment.
Fuck this finery.
Another party, another socialite get-together celebrating
hollow mirth and pretended fellowship. Richness and fame came with their own
baggage, more so for the CEO of one of the most successful organization in the
country.
Four years ago, as a disgraced engineering dropout, she couldn’t
have imagined her start-up to have scaled such heights. Her patented model of
software encryption had not only earned her plaudits from the academic and
scientific fraternity, but also presented a huge business opportunity. She
could offer instant online privacy to millions of government-wary consumers
willing to shell-out a fortune for her services.
She had started at the micro-level, going door-to-door with
her software installed on a writeable CD. In the pre-internet era, she had
relied on word of mouth and cheap sharing among her locality friends to
publicize her idea, earning a trifle for every sale.
“What the hell is she always up to, this girl!” her father
would complain to her mother, who’d have little time to look into the daily
engagements of her teenage daughter. “Doesn’t have a degree or anything, what
the hell is she going to do when she grows up?”
“Aap bhi na, don’t
worry too much. Anyway, she has to go off and get married,” she would reply
hurriedly.
Somewhere deep down, her parents had come to terms with the
fact that their middle class upbringing had failed to launch her into the
fiercely competitive world. Marriage appeared to them to be the last bet, but a
good one at that: she wasn’t wanting in the department of looks and appearance.
At 15, she had eloped with a classmate and would have succeeded in running away
from home, had the plan not been foiled by her spoilsport-of-an-elder brother.
“Dad, Ira is planning to run away with that village idiot of
his,” he’d blabbed.
“What?! When?”
“Tonight. I eavesdropped on her when she was on the call
with him.”
That had done it for her. She had been severely punished and
grounded at home for a full week. Considering this reprimand enough to suppress
her ‘undue’ interest in the opposite sex, her family had not anticipated her
next move.
After a day of mewling and whining, she had reserved herself
to the confines of her bedroom and refused to come out despite repeated calls.
Food was sneaked in through the gap in the door by her brother, who felt guilty
for having told on her. When she finally did come out on the third day, it was
with a homemade transistor in her blackened hands, her face shining through all
the muck and her open hair messily falling on her face. She was nothing like
her earlier self; all her angst had vanished. One could contend that she looked
ungracefully sexy in a very schoolgirl-ish sense.
“Look what I made, Ma!” she ran to her to display her new
‘invention’.
Her parents’ anger had cooled off by now and they greeted
her with surprised acceptance.
“What is it, Ira?”
her brother asked, an engineer-in-the-making himself.
“A radio transistor, bhaiyya.
I saw the design in one of your books, and decided to make one myself!” Her
glee was palpable. As months went by and technology progressed at ever-faster
rate, her gadgets changed and so did her mastery. From merely possessing a
dextrous touch with mechanics, she grew to teach herself to code and write
virtual languages which rarely anyone of her age even knew the name of.
It was when she topped the National Science Olympiad in the
Delhi state her parents thought it best to leave her to her own devices and not
interrupt her natural course of inclination. She had not looked back ever,
having precociously finished school at 16 and joined Indian Institute of
Technology, Kanpur the next year.
A drop of estrogen in an ocean of testosterone, her natural
instincts had taken over as soon as the restrictive home atmosphere gave way to
the freedom of the girls’ hostel. She would juggle time between her hobbies of
software coding and chess with outings with the most ‘desirable’ men on campus.
Her sex-capades were known far and wide and she had promptly became to be known
as the ‘slut’ of the college. She was known to consume recreational drugs and
her dorm room was looked at with disgust and, to be fair, a detestation born
out of envy.
This disrepute was what eventually led to her ignominious
eviction from the institute the subsequent year. She would have liked to believe
that she had been expelled because she refused to conform to the ancient values
of an institute in decadence, but she knew it was more to do with her lapse of
judgement that had led to the extremity.
The intercom line on her desk rang, shaking her off her
thoughts. She cast the invitation aside with a belittling shove, letting it
land in the heap of trash already too full for the waste basket, and picked up
the receiver.
“Ma’am, Mr. Almeida is on hold. Want me to route him
through?”
She sighed. Joseph ‘Jo’ Almeida, one of her earliest aides
cum go-to lawyer was starting to get annoying with his all-too frequent calls
of late.
“Go ahead.”
The line dropped momentarily and the familiar low-pitched,
inconsistent voice of her lawyer greeted her.
“Hey, Ira! Wassup?”
“Nothing much, Jo. Just being barraged by some unneeded
invitations and phone calls.” She hoped he would take the hint.
“Haha, we all have been there. Anyway, what are you doing
this Sunday afternoon? Is there a prior engagement?” His voice gave away his
anticipation to meet her.
“Um,” she thought rapidly, “I don’t know Jo…” Her eye fell
on the crumpled invitation she had strode into the dustbin moments ago.
“…oh yes, I have this lunch invitation! Some fancy get-together.
I’d rather call sick and--”
“Oh, no,” he cut in, “that’s what I wanted to talk about!”
She sighed.
“What about it?”
“You must attend, Ira. All the major stakeholders in our
company are going to be there. I’ve heard that the Board itself has convened
the whole thing.”
‘Our company’ my arse.
“What for, but?” She was genuinely curious.
“To, er…” he hesitated, “to get you to…change your mind
about going open source.” His voice had grown softer and dropped down to a
whisper.
Ira fumed, warm air flaring up her nostrils. She had announced
to make the code of her program public in two days and known that many in the
Board of Directors had not taken kindly to the proposal.
Her initial lust to gain financial riches had long since
exhausted. After assuring a lifetime of comfort for herself from the money she
had already made, she had had an actual change of heart and decided to give it
up for free usage all over the online world. While governments were getting
increasingly paranoid about private content on the internet, online rights activists
had been campaigning against allegations of snooping through private mails and
messages by the NSA. She had been in the eye of the storm since she was one of
the very few service providers of authentic encryption software that could be
updated to work its way around every governmental decrypting device and system
in existence. Her allegiance had been a matter of speculations for months,
until last week when she had announced to release her code into the open source
in the coming few days. Not only would that deal a lethal blow to the National
Security Agency and its global counterparts, but would also be a blessing for
international militant outfits over the world, who could customize the code and
tailor it to their specific needs.
“Listen, Jo,” she started, “how sure are you about this?”
“I’m quite positive, Ira. In my opinion, you must surely
reconsider your stance.” He suddenly sounded on the edge of desperation.
“No, I am not going to do that,” she replied firmly. “I know
what I’m doing with my creation and no one can arm-twist me out of my resolve.”
“But think of all the wrongdoing you are indirectly
encouraging!” His protests were rising in pitch and amplitude with each
syllable.
“’Indirectly’ is
the important word here, Jo. I am not responsible for the actions of a criminal
who avails my cutting edge technology. My job is to give to the world what I
know and am capable of! What the world makes
of it isn’t my purview.” She smiled inwardly, feeling happy about her
eloquence.
“But try to understand, Ira…”
“No,” she snapped, “I won’t. And Jo, why the fuck are you so concerned? Do you have a stake in
this decision, too?”
Don’t fuck up, Ira.
Don’t let anger get the better of you.
The line was blank for 5 seconds; she couldn’t hear him
breathing but knew he was around.
“Jo?” she asked, “listen…I’m sorry.” She added
apologetically.
“You…just don’t get it, Ira.” She could hear his voice
quivering. “I can’t make you see sense.”
His final words rang in her ears as he cut the call before
she could respond. She sighed to herself and slammed the receiver down.
“Fuck you, Jo!” she shouted at the telephone and stretched further
back in her recliner in frustration.
Why was he making such a big deal out of it? She had always
known him to be a level-headed person who always took her side of the matter
and only questioned her in an advisory manner. Was the Board involved in any
way?
Why can’t shit be
simpler?
The more she looked at the crumpled invitation nestled at
the top of the wastepaper basket, the more reasons she found to attend the
lunch.
Do I even have a
choice?
3 comments:
A nice story, I read in recent times. I like the approach of Ira, who is very confident of his achiements and decision. The story is thought provoking and leads me to ponder upon the views of a young scientist. Really the efforts of the writer is appreciable. I admire his mature writing.
--Shailbala Misra.
thank you dadi ma! :)
the formation of sentences and the structure of your story is your own style and I like it very much. the way you bind the story of the girl, describing instances from her life, kept me involved throughout the reading. keep writing and thanks for sharing!
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